http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vtBN8xdqnF0
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this is something i started to do with the idea of modular, and i am reading it over the youtube song.
This is an interesting approach to modularity. I am happy that you employed this technique after the class discussion. The words reach out the screen creating a visceral reaction that "prick[s]" and alerts me. In a way each word and syllable alerts its predecessor and successor, igniting the entire piece like magnolias in spring. I would recommend trying to stay away from words like murder, because they are already visceral. Doing this will force you to create the modular intensity yourself.
ReplyDeleteBelow is my riff off your modulart.
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